The piece I wrote about for my first project builder was a
serious poem about the author’s love and admiration for the beautiful game of
soccer. I feel like he didn’t really have a specific intended audience, but the
people who would appreciate and relate to his work would be people with the
same passion for the game as him. For instance, a student athlete who plays
soccer would read this poem and completely understand what the author is saying
and aiming to get across to the readers. I wouldn’t even settle on just soccer
players however. The way the poem is structured it would make sense to any athlete,
because the author doesn’t mention that he is speaking of soccer at all. He
references to the sport of which he is speaking of as “the beautiful game”, but
in a way that could be interpreted as the sport of football to a football player
or as baseball to a baseball player. I feel that was a technique that the
author used to get across not only to soccer players, but also to an athlete of
any other sport. The repeated use of the line “the beautiful game” also serves
a second purpose I believe. Throughout the poem the author writes lines
comparing the sport to a war or battle. He makes sure that readers realize that
he is talking about a sport, but he never calls it just a game. The only time
he refers it to just a game instead of a fight is when he repeats the line “the
beautiful game”. That line serves as a reminder to the readers who more than
likely are athletes themselves that it is perfectly fine for an athlete to have
a winning mentality and a desire to be the best, but at the end of the day it
is just a game that will be over in 90 minutes. I have been a competitive athlete
all my life. I have played in teams for my schools, but also in soccer leagues
outside the school, so I can relate to his poem and the passion he feels for
the game. A person who does not practice a sport competitively probably wouldn’t
understand why he refers to the sport as a battle or a war. A person of a competitive
nature will always see any task he is doing as a war in which he or she needs
to come out victorious. It is not about destroying an opponent; it is about making
all your hard work and practice that led up to the game worth it. The author
also referred to that point in the poem. He writes, “Long before I came here, I
have prepared for this day”. The game is
referred to as a battle because every player has that mentality that losing in
not an option due to the long hours of practice that were put into winning the
game beforehand. Any athlete will relate to that as well. No soccer player
wants to lose a 90 minute game that has taken long numerous days of rigorous
training getting ready for. That is why it is referred to as a battle, because both
sides have gone through the same sacrifices in order to come out victorious. The
poem is meant to serve as an ode from an athlete to their respective sport. It
is as if the poem is what the athlete is thinking of right before the beginning
of a game that they have been working hard to win for a long time. The serious
and determined tone that the author conveys in his piece serves the purpose of
inspiration. Inspiration for both the sport and the athlete. Every player who
is participating in the sport has the same love for the game, but the poem is
directed at inspiring each player personally to win their respective game.
Great analysis about the purpose behind the poem. I particularly liked how you made it personal to yourself and how you broke down and analyzed each individual line. My only comment would be to incorporate the conventions of a poem into the analysis which can answer the question from the prompt: "What is the relationship between the conventions of this genre and its aims with the audience?" You already have a great and in-depth analysis about how it affects the audience, just add in the conventions of a poem you identified in project builder 1 with that analysis so it builds that relationship. Overall, I really enjoyed how deep you got with the poem's message and meaning, it was a good way to show how those specific choices made by the writer were effective for the intended audience. :)
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