For my first project I chose to focus on a poem titled “The
Beautiful Game”. The poem was published in 2013 by Joseph Furdeck. The sport of
soccer has always been referred to as “the beautiful game” because of its’
immense popularity all across the globe. The poem has a serious tone, and a
detail of it that I found interesting was that it did not mention once that the
sport being talked about was soccer. It describes the feeling that a soccer
player feels when he or she steps onto the field before a game. I have played
soccer all my life, so the description of the field and the feeling of energy
that he describes is very familiar to me. I feel the author’s passion for the
game throughout the poem, in particular the couple of lines that state, “This
is our fight, It is our moment, it is what we know, What we live for”. An
intensity that only a devoted athlete would have is felt throughout the poem by
the diction the author utilizes. He compares the game between two teams as a
battle and a fight. In this poem the sport of soccer is not simply a sport, but
rather a fierce contest in which no player wants to be part of the team that
emerges as the loser at the finale. The author also demonstrates a sort of
competitive sportsmanship in which he admits that there is no doubt that he is
the most determined to come out victorious, but he also describes looking over
to this opponents in the pre-game and he notices the same determined
expressions in their faces and body that he possesses. This poem is not very
long at all, but it covers pretty much every part of what a soccer player
experiences building up to a very important and crucial match. He begins the
poem with a stanza describing how he was born to play the game and be the best
at it. He goes on to share the long time he has been practicing the game before
leading up to the point in which he is at now. The entire poem describes a
person who obviously has love for the game, but more than anything a person who
has an obsession with winning and being the best at what he does which is the
mentality of a true athlete. The only true indication of simply loving to play
the game is how he both begins the poem and ends it. He begins it and ends it
with the simple line, “The Beautiful Game”. That is definitely the most
powerful line of the poem because he goes on to describe his passion and his
immense competitiveness he has for the game before he finishes it off again by
describing it as simply beautiful above anything else.
This project builder does a very good job analyzing the poem, while unpacking a deeper message through stylistic devices and direct quotations. I really enjoyed reading how soccer played an important role in the author's life, and his passion for sports is clearly demonstrated here. However, I have only caught glimpse of the "ingredients" for the "poem" genre through the mention of "stanzas". I would suggest that to improve this piece of work, the author should include more ingredients to what makes the chosen work a poem. The author could also challenge the genre by mentioning how "The Beautiful Game" might not even be a poem at all. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this project builder as how the author presented his ideas provided a strong connection.
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